Studio Brief 4: Initial Ideas Crit

Following on from putting forward my initial ideas, the feedback that I got from my crit was to develop the poster idea further. At first there were suggestions on how to expand on the poster idea of a good students vs a bad one, but not to use the word 'evil', bad worked a lot better. There were other suggestions of how I could show the opposites of students like through a comic strip or a series of posters. There was a suggestion to use stickers and also a suggestion to create a calendar, this was when the ideas matched up together to combine the two and create a September calendar for the fist years, highlighting what they should and shouldn't do. They would act as a series of temptations that the students would have to fight against and think should they be really doing that or should they be attending university and completing the work.