The main feedback that we got from our presentation is that it needs to be cut down quite a bit as we include the stuff about grade 2 and stamped, although they are both important to show how we got from start to finish, they don't need to be spoken about in the presentation because it becomes too long. This information is more relevant to blogs and design boards.
Another key point we got from the presentation is that the receipt idea was liked by everyone and is a strong consistent idea that runs throughout the whole branding. The way the wayfinding was created could be developed further to the receipts, by exaggerating the length of them so making them longer for the invites and flyers. Also printing on the back of them could be another exploration.
It was also important to keep one image per slide of the presentation and explain each time why they have been put on there, relating each theme and idea throughout.
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